
I wrote about someone I was really into at the time. My mind was on her and I really had no way of contacting her, so I did it through writing. I'm not sure if it was the atmosphere or not, but I like how it turned out.
Anyone who has experienced a break in a relationship that results with a broken heart can empathize with this poem.
# IN HER EYES I SAW CARE FOR MY SAKE,
SOON I FOUND IT WAS NOTHING BUT FAKE…
# HER HAIR WERE NOT-PLAITED BUT STRAIGHT,
AND I MADE HER AS MY ULTIMATE FATE…
# I WONDER WAS IT REAL OR MY DREAM’S PROJECTION,
BUT IT TURNED OUT TO BE MY DEVIL’S SENSATION…
# SHE WAS GOOD, SHE WAS NICE,
BUT MY FORTUNE WAS NOT SO WISE…
# YOU MAY FIND SOMEONE BETTER THAN ME,
BUT TRUST ME YOU CAN NOT FIND ANYONE "LIKE" ME…
# THOSE WERE THE DAYS TO BE REMEMBERED A LIFETIME,
AND YOU STILL COME IN MY DREAMS FROM TIME TO TIME…
# I WASTED MY DAYS AND HAD SLEEPLESS NIGHTS,
TODAY I WISH I DIDN’T HAD ANY OF HER SIGHTS…
# MAY BE IT WAS NOT HER FAULT AND SHE WAS FINE,
BUT ULTIMATELY ALL LOSS WAS OF MINE…
# BUT ALL THIS PROVED TO BE A GOOD DEED,
AND MADE ME REALISED THAT A FRIEND IN NEED IS A FRIEND INDEED…
# YOU MIGHT NOT UNDERSTAND MY FEELINGS IN THIS REGARD,
BUT FOR READING MY POEM THANK YOU VERY MUCH ON MY PART…
# REST , LOVE IS ALL A MYSTERY,
NO ONE KNOWS ITS HISTORY…

its very touchin wich goes staright 4m 1 heart 2 d oder.... it can only b written by a person who s suffered dis kinda pain... very gud man(nikhil hussain)
ReplyDeletekaran
inner world wound nicely paited..lovely
ReplyDeleteWow...amazing poem you have just won a fan
SUPERB MAN, DIL CHU LIYA.
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ReplyDeleteI nvr knew I had a good poet as a friend. there's beauty in simplicity and I felt the supressed voices ringing in the depths of your heart. its really nice bhai......
ReplyDeletethe feeling after reading this poem cant be explained it the words.......really very good..
ReplyDeleteaaj itne dino baad is poem ko padh ke isse aur bhi achhe se samajh paaya hun........
ReplyDeletemarvellous(for me).
sach mein, tum kitne.............
my post deleted by author :(
ReplyDeletehey ur piece is jst too gud..!!!!
ReplyDeleteits amazing...
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